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Jock Relaxer's Stroke Manly
Posted:
November 12th, 2014, 12:32 pm
by JockRelaxer
I set out to rework a few lines from Stroke Manly, but ended up almost completely rewriting it, but still would like to give a shout out to JackDraggo. I have uploaded my own version, here, and encourage others to upload their own version as well. Enjoy and let me know what you think!
Posted:
November 12th, 2014, 5:24 pm
by CyrilMtl
Your two files seems interesting, to bad I willl have to wait after the premium period to listen to them.
Posted:
November 12th, 2014, 10:50 pm
by psiboi1977
I have the same issue here... they sound very interesting
come on guys
Posted:
November 13th, 2014, 1:41 am
by JockRelaxer
its worth it.
Posted:
November 13th, 2014, 11:40 am
by JackDrago
So, what did you change?
Posted:
November 13th, 2014, 4:57 pm
by xavious
I'm also curious as to what sort of things you have changed compared to the original.
Posted:
November 13th, 2014, 5:32 pm
by JockRelaxer
pretty much ended up rewriting it because i realized, increasingly, the script was developing its own voice.
The file is intended to be listened to while you stroke, and it suggest that you will go deeper and let a manlier you rise to the surface as you go into trance, but then to hold onto that you as even after you cum.
i do not suggest you become alpha or dominating, but, rather, you let your own sexual position shine through. really looking forward to some feedback....
Posted:
November 13th, 2014, 6:08 pm
by JackDrago
Cool. Did you keep the ratchet? That's what makes it effective in the long term.
Posted:
November 13th, 2014, 6:57 pm
by JockRelaxer
no, that word is fraught with cultural baggage :D
did other men find it useful?
Posted:
November 13th, 2014, 10:37 pm
by CyrilMtl
I liked it, in the original file there was a 'click' of the ratchet, I almost go over the edge as I was edging myself while listening of the file.
Posted:
November 14th, 2014, 4:09 pm
by JackDrago
Of the responses I have gotten the ratchet is most listeners favorite part.
What cultural baggage do you mean? I am an American and I didn't sense any.
Posted:
November 14th, 2014, 9:45 pm
by JockRelaxer
http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Ratchet
Posted:
November 15th, 2014, 3:36 am
by xavious
I've never heard that definition of ratchet before, and I thought I was pretty decent at slang lingo.