WarpMyMind

I set out to rework a few lines from Stroke Manly, but ended up almost completely rewriting it, but still would like to give a shout out to JackDraggo. I have uploaded my own version, here, and encourage others to upload their own version as well. Enjoy and let me know what you think!

Your two files seems interesting, to bad I willl have to wait after the premium period to listen to them.

I have the same issue here... they sound very interesting

its worth it.

So, what did you change?

I'm also curious as to what sort of things you have changed compared to the original.

pretty much ended up rewriting it because i realized, increasingly, the script was developing its own voice.
The file is intended to be listened to while you stroke, and it suggest that you will go deeper and let a manlier you rise to the surface as you go into trance, but then to hold onto that you as even after you cum.
i do not suggest you become alpha or dominating, but, rather, you let your own sexual position shine through. really looking forward to some feedback....

Cool. Did you keep the ratchet? That's what makes it effective in the long term.

no, that word is fraught with cultural baggage :D

did other men find it useful?

I liked it, in the original file there was a 'click' of the ratchet, I almost go over the edge as I was edging myself while listening of the file.

Of the responses I have gotten the ratchet is most listeners favorite part.

What cultural baggage do you mean? I am an American and I didn't sense any.

http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Ratchet

I've never heard that definition of ratchet before, and I thought I was pretty decent at slang lingo.