About my files..

[ThatoneGurll]

I'm kind of stuck and not sure what direction to take them.
I want to create more files and eventually make payed files to.
Not because I want to profit but because I want to be able to say yeah i'm good enough to make files that are payed files. more of like.. a thing with.. being good enough to have a file that requires payment.

I think Kei makes some pretty decent ones. but they're all TTS

My files include things like:
Becoming fox girl (my own voice)
Living a girl's life (one of my newest feminization ones)
Collared to be transformed into

I just kind of want to make something that's good quality.
If anyone has ideas or suggestions for types of feminization files I can make please let me know.
also if none of you have heard of any of my files, for non premium users here is a alternate download link to both living a girl's life as well as Collared to be transformed into.
I'm seeking feedback.

living a girl's life:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8RnbF ... sp=sharing
Collared to be transformed into: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8RnbF ... sp=sharing

Here is a sample of the script I plan to have for my next entry of living a girl's life:

You are living a girl's life now.
Listen to my voice.
Sink down
Sinking down.
Nicely.
Easily.
Listen to my voice.
Sink.
10
9
8
7
6
5
4
3
2
1
zero
zero
zero
zero
zero

Are you deep yet?
Again.
You are living a girl's life now.
Listen to my voice.
Sink down.
Nicely.
Easily.
Listen to my voice.
Sink.
Feeling so good.
10
Feeling the green grass.
9
Trusting the sun to take you deep into trance.
8
Feeling the green grass.
7
Feeling the heat of the sun on your body.
6
Feeling so good.
5
Trusting everything I say to you now.
Good girl.
4
Good girl.
3
You are becoming more of a good obedient girly with each number.
2
Becoming so obedient and open for me now.
1
Do you feel good?
Zero.
Zero.
Zero.
Do you feel good?
Zero.
Zero.
Zero.
Do you know about zero?
Zero is a number that goes on forever.
Because it is a closed loop.
Thinking about zero.
Dropping deeply.
Focus on your breathing.
Let your cute tummy settle.
You have a cute girly tummy.
You can feel your tummy getting thinner every day.
Such a good girl.
Sinking deeper.
Soft skin.
Soft lips.
Cute eyes.
Wonderful girly creamy skin.
Smooth.
So wonderful.
Such a good little clitty.
Feeling so cute.
Such a cute girly.
Such an attractive fully affirmed girl now.
Yes.
Counting down again.
Feel my speech sink deeper into the realm of your mind.
The realm of your mind is accepting my voice.
Feel me now, creating the realm of your girly mind.
Your girly mind is inescapable.
Do you want to know a secret?
I'll tell you a secret.
The entirety of your mind is that of a girl's mind.
Because the entirety of your mind is that of a girl's mind you can only be a girl.
Your mind makes up who you are doesn't that mean that you are a girl.
Think about it.
You can't help but think about it.
As you sink deeper.
I am creating for you now the realm of your mind.
You have a very girly mind.
Your head is filled with deep deep caverns and chambers.
Inside all of them my words echo deeply.
To your unconscious. To your girly self.
Your girly self is strong.
She is you.
You feel a female presence in your own mind.
It feels like physical sensations in your head.
It feels like girly physical swimming sensations inside your head.
Trying to burst out.
Trying to burst out into the reality you know.
Let your girly self flow through your entire body now.
Feeling the energy of your girly self flow from your head all the way to your feet.
Taken over your whole body and mind by your girly self.
Feel that your self is being converted.
Feel that you are trading how you used to feel every day for very girly feelings.
Feel that I am draining away all maleness now and replacing it.
Replacing it with a realm.
A realm deep in your self. In your mind.
This realm holds your girly self and is indestructable.
Your girly self wants to be you.
You want to be her.
Feel your identity now becoming her.
Feel yourself changing into her.
You are still yourself, you are not being over written.
No.
You are not being over written.
You are becoming a very girly version of yourself.
This continues each day.
Anything you perceive as girly will be thought about daily.
Anything you feel is girly will be felt daily.
Anything you believe is girly will be experienced every day.
Every day in the realm of your girly mind.
Until it becomes something that is on your mind every day.
Until you are a girl totally.
Feel yourself exchanging your old feelings of yourself.
Exchanging them.
This is a permanent trade.
I am taking your male sense of self far away.
It is leaving you.
Your male self is not a part of you.
Feel how blank you are now. And obedient.
All maleness leaving your mind.
All doubts fully emptying out.
Becoming the girl you wish to be.
You are becoming the girl you wish to be.
I am granting your deepest desires.
Feel this now. Feel your desire to be a girl.
Meditate on it. feel it flow.
Let it flow.
No resisting now.
In this state you are free from what we call your usual self and mind.
So my words can go as deep into you.
As you let them.
Yes.
My words can go as deep into you, as you let them.
As you want them to be.
Feel the previous girly trances you have experienced reinforcing you as a girl now.
Feel that your body is changing every day now.
Feel that you are going to develop a girly booty.
Say and think to yourself when you see your ass, my girly booty is so cute.
Yes.
Good girl.
Say and think to yourself when you see your eyes, my eyes are a girl's eyes.
Good girl.
Yes.
Say and think to yourself when you see your nipples, my nipples are so girly.

[Jackstock]

I downloaded a few of your files from warpmymind.

-Change your mic/mic position so your breathing doesnt make sounds
-Don't suggest that someone will come back to your file. Why are they coming back? what FEELING will make them come back? Suggest that.
-I dont like to even talk about the "file" in recordings. I think it breaks the fourth wall, so to speak.
- Make your suggestions flow in, almost like conversation. You tend to say suggestions kind of harsh like "GO DEEPER." This may work on some people, but the majority of people will find this abrasive. Make it flow.
-Your audio cuts in and out sometimes. make sure it doesnt do that.
-You're using stories as a method of suggestion. This is good.
-Sometimes you raise your voice suddenly. I think you may raise it a little too much.
-I wouldnt say "zero" so much unless it happens to be a trigger you have implanted.
-You are suggesting in the present tense. this is very good! Many hypnotists make a mistake with this.

Collared to be transformed into
-The text to speech is pretty good. But it talks a little too fast for me.
-The piano sounds a little funny, im not sure what it is (it sounds okay in the second half of the file. its actually pretty good.)
-The audio gain seriously changes halfway through. Make sure it sounds even and doesnt change.

[Str41ght]

I came here looking for some sort of female takeover files and decided to have a peek at this thread. Always looking for more powerful fem files I downloaded 'living a girls life'. My humble honest first response was I didn't like the tone of the instument playing. Sounded distorted but thankfuly I kept listening. I now actually really like the distorted effect, the file wouldn't be the same without it. I think it helped me to sink down. I can say I actually had some powerful experiences, to my surprise. I found myself weakened real quickly and submiting. Infact I had two new experiences, one in my head that made me feel a little scared that the suggestions were overwhelming (in a good way) and that maybe they were 'forever'. Really quite powerful. But being me I got off on that in a big way. The other was I felt like a tight grip with a heating effect in my chest / belly. Not sure if it was deep feelings / emotions or maybe something spiritual. Overall it created a powerful dream like effect that, quite worryingly felt like was going to be forced upon me with permanency. I loved it that much I listened to it a second time straight after, which the mental and emotional effects were amplified. I also love the long outro which really helps with the return to reality with the hope that you are now a changed being. I will continue listening to this file and would love to listen to anything else you produce in the feminising, submision or anything erotic. After two listens I can say it is far better than many payfiles which usually are useless. Thanks for the great experience look forward to more.

[ThatoneGurll]

Thank you Jackstock for your humble and sound advice! I'll follow all of it as best I can!
The distorted piano and the sound changes in the Collared to transform file are kind off kilter yes it's because I pasted in a different part of a file.. and didn't get the balancing right.
I'll re do it and fix it all up.
Thank you for everything you said both the plusses. The creative criticism is going to help me so much!


Str41ght:
Thank you for giving me such useful feedback on the file, and yes the distorted piano seems disruptive at first with that induction but then I too found it was easy to get used to.
The feeling of a loss of control to the file is that strong for you huh? I'm glad!

Really? you flatter me? Better than most payed files?

Uhm thanks I guess, I'm ecstatic you think so well of at least one of my files.
The living a girl's life is probably my best file ever as I spent a lot a lot a lot of time on it.
I want to make it even better or make a new version.

The other was I felt like a tight grip with a heating effect in my chest / belly.
I will continue listening to this file and would love to listen to anything else you produce in the feminising, submision or anything erotic.

I don't think anyone has reported that before.
Thank you for your continued support and I will definitely be making more files once I finish the second version of living a girl's life you'll be very very welcome to try it out. I think I'll need to spend a few days on it actually however so it may not be ready for a while!
To anyone else responding to this thread thank you for bothering and thank you for the time and efforts, everyone who has already!