Jock Relaxer's Stroke Manly

[JockRelaxer]

I set out to rework a few lines from Stroke Manly, but ended up almost completely rewriting it, but still would like to give a shout out to JackDraggo. I have uploaded my own version, here, and encourage others to upload their own version as well. Enjoy and let me know what you think!

[CyrilMtl]

Your two files seems interesting, to bad I willl have to wait after the premium period to listen to them.

[psiboi1977]

I have the same issue here... they sound very interesting

[JockRelaxer]

its worth it.

[JackDrago]

So, what did you change?

[xavious]

I'm also curious as to what sort of things you have changed compared to the original.

[JockRelaxer]

pretty much ended up rewriting it because i realized, increasingly, the script was developing its own voice.
The file is intended to be listened to while you stroke, and it suggest that you will go deeper and let a manlier you rise to the surface as you go into trance, but then to hold onto that you as even after you cum.
i do not suggest you become alpha or dominating, but, rather, you let your own sexual position shine through. really looking forward to some feedback....

[JackDrago]

Cool. Did you keep the ratchet? That's what makes it effective in the long term.

[JockRelaxer]

no, that word is fraught with cultural baggage :D

did other men find it useful?

[CyrilMtl]

I liked it, in the original file there was a 'click' of the ratchet, I almost go over the edge as I was edging myself while listening of the file.

[JackDrago]

Of the responses I have gotten the ratchet is most listeners favorite part.

What cultural baggage do you mean? I am an American and I didn't sense any.

[JockRelaxer]

http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Ratchet

[xavious]

I've never heard that definition of ratchet before, and I thought I was pretty decent at slang lingo.