This is Tainted Sins, Sylvia Black\'s co-writer (she\'s currently back in the hospital). Anyway, I love the premise of this recording, but a fifteen minute induction with less than five minutes of suggestions is a bit disappointing, especially for a pay file. I\'d recommend picking up a copy of \"Sin and Syntax\" by Constance Hale and possibly \"Beginnings, Middles & Ends\" by Nancy Kress. In the meantime, you might consider a rewrite. Since you use a walking through the woods induction, there\'s a lot of potential for adding and strengthening the suggestions during the journey; subtle at first, the leaves whispering in the wind, then maybe illusions of you trying to make love to a woman and blushing, maybe even crying, when he cums mere moments after entering her. Then by the time the listener arrives at the lake, your clear and unyielding commands would make for a fine climax (pardon the pun) rather than feeling like we\'ve just begun only to have it end a few minutes latter.--Please take this as constructive criticism, no insult intended.

Saddened to read SylviaBlack\'s comments, above...would really like a good file along these lines.