The editing wasn\'t as good this time, background noise can easily be tuned out but the way that it became dead silence immediately after every time you paused was jarring and very very noticeable. It made everything feel very choppy. The delivery of the script is hard to comment on because it sounds like you recorded each sentence separately then put them together. \n\nI think before you make another body files with suggestions you should make a wakener file, and when you make your next files, just leave the background noise in unless you can make it go away when you\'re talking in addition to when you\'re not.

Great job--now all I need is someone to practice with :)

Awesome file\n

Thank you so much. I have given head twice this week and got my first belly full of cum. Now to get my next fix.

Really enjoyed the voicing and pace of this file. Excellent job. I am looking forward to more files form you.